Borrowed Time :: FicWad: fresh-picked original and fan fiction

Heaven does not repent; it's unforgiving nature has doomed us all.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: - Published: 2008/08/11 - Updated: 2008/08/12 - 133 words - Complete

Borrowed Time

(#) Adaku-chan 2008-08-12 03:00:01 PM

I can really relate. Reminds me how Earth is. Seriously loved it!
Borrowed Time

(#) BlackAngelChick 2008-08-29 06:45:55 AM

Loved it!
Brilliant poem, keep writing!
Borrowed Time

(#) Lyanvis 2008-10-13 12:05:23 PM

very deep. Yukimara Sanada Marise approves.
Borrowed Time

(#) quirky_sass 2008-12-01 08:44:41 AM

There were certain parts that pulled me in, especially the ending. I liked the repetition in it, made the lines sink deeper and stand out. All in all:

I Like.

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