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Short Story For English Coursework

I knew that he was depressed, miserable and angry...but I never knew he'd resort to this.

Category: Horror - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2008/07/15 - Updated: 2008/07/15 - 1438 words - Complete

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• Short Story For English Coursework

  (#) frankxgerard 2008-07-16 12:07:48 AM

  WHOAA me likes that. Too fuckin realistic, dude. Has this, like, happened to you? favorites
  
  That's awesome. I can't say how jealous I am right now. :)
  
  continues ranting on YouTube message

  Author's response

  :) Aw, thanks. It means a lot to me that you say that. Lol, yeah, it's happened to me many times before :P Every goddamned school I go to!

• Short Story For English Coursework

  (#) RyanRossLuver 2008-07-17 07:58:23 PM

  That is so amazing, and so relaistic and picturesque.
  
  Is it a common occurance in schools over there?
  
  But once again, amazing, and that's really good coursework. Your teacher will love it!
  
  xox Emmi

  Author's response

  Aw, thanks. :)
  
  Lol, I'm from England, it's just, I've heard of more of these things happening in America instead of England, so...
  
  But thank you very much for reading and for these really kind words.

• Short Story For English Coursework

  (#) seabatty06 2008-07-18 09:58:30 PM

  wow! there's been three or more of these kind of things happening in my state (Georgia, USA) alone! so it's kind of realistic to me! but i loved it, and good job capturing the details of it.
  
  

  Author's response

  Really? I haven't heard of anything like this happening around me. I don't think it's that common in England.
  
  Thanks for the review, I really appreciate every compliment that people give me.

• Short Story For English Coursework

  (#) deanio 2008-07-19 02:26:14 PM

  that was so sad. i really liked your style though, it was some real good writing. :)

  Author's response

  Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

• Short Story For English Coursework

  (#) ilo9vemcrgmfrb 2008-07-19 10:03:24 PM

  You are an amazing writer.
  And I'm jealous of your skill.
  
  The way that this was written almost makes it seem like you actually experienced this.

  Author's response

  You really think that? Aw, thanks!

• Short Story For English Coursework

  (#) MyFamousLastWords 2008-07-26 02:00:30 PM

  Its Frigging Awesome!
  
  Gosh Like Yeah! I Live In Ireland And I've Heared Some Things Like This Happening,But Never To Me(Thank God) And Its Just Like As Some Said It Feels Like It Happened!
  
  Its Really Awesome! Sorry I Just Keep Rambling On It Just Rocks!
  
  ML,Fin Ox.

  Author's response

  That's what I went for. I wanted to make it as realistic as possible, so thanks for telling me that I succeeded :)
  
  Lol, I don't mind it when people ramble. I do it too much, anyway. :)

• Short Story For English Coursework

  (#) sjoukJDB 2008-07-31 11:47:59 AM

  Whoah.
  Really, whoah.
  I agree with everything said above. It is so realistic.
  
  I think it is terrible these things really happen. Well, I mean, off course I do, but..It doesn't have to be this way. The way kids treat other kids is monstrous, they get beat up, or depressed..No wonder if they turn crazy.
  It's sick that these things happen, and I really think schools should do something about it. I know it can be different, I live in a country where it bloody is different.
  Yeah, sorry, I'm quite rebellious against the american High School culture.

  Author's response

  Yeah, I agree. All of this is horrible. Especially how people think that other people deserve this. Not only someone killing everyone with a gun, but also bullying.

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