Review for Cocoa
Cocoa
(#) sleepygeeky 2006-06-11 01:42:16 AM
Very sweet, and spot-on with the character.
I dunno if you want "nitpicks" or not, but you said: "I should've have to ask." and I think you mean "I shouldn't have had to ask" (or some sort of Chase grammar massacre thereof.)
Great job. :)
I dunno if you want "nitpicks" or not, but you said: "I should've have to ask." and I think you mean "I shouldn't have had to ask" (or some sort of Chase grammar massacre thereof.)
Great job. :)
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