Review for Remote Control
Remote Control
(#) fyre_byrd 2005-10-31 05:32:49 PM
The content of the story matches the point of view you've chosen very well. You identification of Reeve as essentially a voyeur is quite insightful.
The little private glimpses that you give into the various characters' lives are all quite endearing. Your descriptions of how characters sleep are believable and intriguing. These are the sorts of things that one doesn't usually think about to wonder about. The second to last paragraph is very insightful although quite simply expressed.
This is a truly enjoyable and interesting story.
The little private glimpses that you give into the various characters' lives are all quite endearing. Your descriptions of how characters sleep are believable and intriguing. These are the sorts of things that one doesn't usually think about to wonder about. The second to last paragraph is very insightful although quite simply expressed.
This is a truly enjoyable and interesting story.
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